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Untitled Script Thing
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Topic Started: Mon 04 Aug 2008 20:20:39 (112 Views)
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Damian
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Mon 04 Aug 2008 20:20:39
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Im not much of an english writer but I did usd to write scripts for fun, so here is something I wrote when i was bored.
Title: Untitled Genre: TBC Written By: Damian
Scene One
Men outside a bar talking amongst each other laughing and joking, Inside 3 men who are sitting at the bar drinking alcohol.
Steven So Louis, why didn’t you tell me about your car breaking down? I have a cousin who works in the industry…
Louis I told you it didn’t break down and it was my fault, erm, okay maybe it was my wife’s fault.
Joe Always blaming the wife, its no wonder she put a gun to your head, she freakin’ hates you and so does your kids.
Steven (Laughing).
Louis Oh thank you, you’re too kind! And who care about that what about you Mr. I lost my doctors note to get out of work it’s no wonder your boss hates you; you’re a jackass.
Steven (Giggles) Go Louis, what you gonna say to that Joe?
Joe (Pauses) I’ll drink to that! (Laughs) Hey Eric! We need more beer!
Eric the Bartender Yeah, yeah I’m comin’… What’s so funny anyways?
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Damian: Sure guys I'll ask him talk soonies. Bradley: Cool bye.
Phone is put down, dial's "Tony"
Tony: Hello? Damian: Dude the guys got their tickets for the expo weekend, but they didnt think about where they were gonna stay, you think they can stay? Tony: Hmm.... I dunno? Damian: Ben will be there! Tony: Good man! Damian: Great thanks dude. Tony: No thank you hehe.
Phone is put down, dial's "Benji"
Benji: Hello? Damian: Tell Brad you guys are clean I got ya a place to stay... Benji: (Calls to Brad) Damian asked Tony and he said yes... Thanks man. Damian: No problem, I told him you would be staying and he said yes immidiatly. Benji: Fancy using me a bitch bait!, great now I have to bring the butt plug and some lube. Damian: Okay, if you want extra ask me...
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Tue 05 Aug 2008 11:45:31
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LOL Mr.I lost my doctors note to get out of work, not bad MM pretty nice! MORE!
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Damian
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Wed 06 Aug 2008 23:53:07
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I used to be real good at scripts but now I havent done it in like 3 years :| My longest script was 92 pages, its a whole freakin movie.
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Spoiler: click to toggle  - Phone Call Scene One
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Damian: Sure guys I'll ask him talk soonies. Bradley: Cool bye.
Phone is put down, dial's "Tony"
Tony: Hello? Damian: Dude the guys got their tickets for the expo weekend, but they didnt think about where they were gonna stay, you think they can stay? Tony: Hmm.... I dunno? Damian: Ben will be there! Tony: Good man! Damian: Great thanks dude. Tony: No thank you hehe.
Phone is put down, dial's "Benji"
Benji: Hello? Damian: Tell Brad you guys are clean I got ya a place to stay... Benji: (Calls to Brad) Damian asked Tony and he said yes... Thanks man. Damian: No problem, I told him you would be staying and he said yes immidiatly. Benji: Fancy using me a bitch bait!, great now I have to bring the butt plug and some lube. Damian: Okay, if you want extra ask me...
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Thu 07 Aug 2008 00:08:11
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if its a whole movie you should send it off to someone lol
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Damian
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Thu 07 Aug 2008 11:05:21
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Lol It was good and funny, but was more of an Adult cartoon comedy like southpark lol but involving bad mouthed mice, and besides that, dispite my spelling errors, I diid bring out personality lol.
Although I am considering writing more advanced scripts, for some genre I wouldnt normally look at so I am open to ideas.
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Spoiler: click to toggle  - Phone Call Scene One
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Damian: Sure guys I'll ask him talk soonies. Bradley: Cool bye.
Phone is put down, dial's "Tony"
Tony: Hello? Damian: Dude the guys got their tickets for the expo weekend, but they didnt think about where they were gonna stay, you think they can stay? Tony: Hmm.... I dunno? Damian: Ben will be there! Tony: Good man! Damian: Great thanks dude. Tony: No thank you hehe.
Phone is put down, dial's "Benji"
Benji: Hello? Damian: Tell Brad you guys are clean I got ya a place to stay... Benji: (Calls to Brad) Damian asked Tony and he said yes... Thanks man. Damian: No problem, I told him you would be staying and he said yes immidiatly. Benji: Fancy using me a bitch bait!, great now I have to bring the butt plug and some lube. Damian: Okay, if you want extra ask me...
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Thu 07 Aug 2008 19:43:32
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I used to be real good at scripts but now I havent done it in like 3 years :| My longest script was 92 pages, its a whole freakin movie. Scripts are over 500 Pages for a standard 2hr movie.
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Damian
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Sun 10 Aug 2008 21:00:25
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depends on how they are layed out and what it is for, mine was for a short animation and i didnt elaborate on it, and since when are movies are a "Standard" 2 hrs? most movies run between 80 mins to 90.
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Spoiler: click to toggle  - Phone Call Scene One
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Damian: Sure guys I'll ask him talk soonies. Bradley: Cool bye.
Phone is put down, dial's "Tony"
Tony: Hello? Damian: Dude the guys got their tickets for the expo weekend, but they didnt think about where they were gonna stay, you think they can stay? Tony: Hmm.... I dunno? Damian: Ben will be there! Tony: Good man! Damian: Great thanks dude. Tony: No thank you hehe.
Phone is put down, dial's "Benji"
Benji: Hello? Damian: Tell Brad you guys are clean I got ya a place to stay... Benji: (Calls to Brad) Damian asked Tony and he said yes... Thanks man. Damian: No problem, I told him you would be staying and he said yes immidiatly. Benji: Fancy using me a bitch bait!, great now I have to bring the butt plug and some lube. Damian: Okay, if you want extra ask me...
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Sun 10 Aug 2008 21:47:04
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well the good movies, aint on for just over a hr... Most successful movies are about an hour and a half to two hours
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Mon 11 Aug 2008 11:47:23
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Says who? just because a movie is long doesnt garentee its success it it only shows they had a high budget, even still the movie can flop.
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Spoiler: click to toggle  - Phone Call Scene One
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Damian: Sure guys I'll ask him talk soonies. Bradley: Cool bye.
Phone is put down, dial's "Tony"
Tony: Hello? Damian: Dude the guys got their tickets for the expo weekend, but they didnt think about where they were gonna stay, you think they can stay? Tony: Hmm.... I dunno? Damian: Ben will be there! Tony: Good man! Damian: Great thanks dude. Tony: No thank you hehe.
Phone is put down, dial's "Benji"
Benji: Hello? Damian: Tell Brad you guys are clean I got ya a place to stay... Benji: (Calls to Brad) Damian asked Tony and he said yes... Thanks man. Damian: No problem, I told him you would be staying and he said yes immidiatly. Benji: Fancy using me a bitch bait!, great now I have to bring the butt plug and some lube. Damian: Okay, if you want extra ask me...
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